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18 October 2007 @ 04:00 pm
Subtle Hint #8  
Title: Subtle Hint #8
Fandom: Hot Fuzz
Character/s: NA/DB
Word Count: 160
Rating: PG(ish)
Summary: Evil. Just...evil!

NOTE: Someone asked for more and I do live to serve.
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7

Subtle Hint #8



“Not mad.”

“Yes, y’are.”

“No, I am not.”

“I can tell.”

“Danny, I’m not mad at you.”

“Then why am I handcuffed to the door?”

“For your own safety.”

“I kissed you! Ain’t that physical assault?”

“Hm. Yes, I suppose it is, Sergeant. Against a superior officer. And now you are in handcuffs.”

“Nicholas, come off it. It weren’t nothin’!”

“You kissed me.”

“Well...yeah…Com’on, let me go before the Andes find us.”

“Do you really think they will be looking for us in this cell?” Nicholas laid down on the cot and propped his arms behind his head.

“Mebbe. If I start yellin’ they will...Nicholas! Com’on! Let me goooo!”


“Oooooo, Nick!”

“Yes, Danny?”

“...We going to stay in this cell all night? It’s stupid. I’m sorry, okay? Let me go.”

“Think you’ve learned your lesson?” Nicholas got up.

“Yes! I did! I...Nicholas?”

“Yes, Danny?”

“Er...the handcuffs are in front of me...”

“I think you’ve been a very bad boy, Danny…”

Current Mood: mischievousmischievous
lacking in glitter: subtexttawg on October 18th, 2007 09:04 pm (UTC)
“I think you’ve been a very bad boy, Danny…”

Rolf! Oooh, the tables have turned! And I love how you use minimal description, but rely on the dialogue. Have I said that already? Anyway, I still have little sparks for love for this this run. It's like a regular first-time story, but in pocket-sized chunks.
mikes_grrl on October 18th, 2007 11:10 pm (UTC)
Awww, I'm glad you love it. It is a lot of fun to write, and pretty challenging too. <3
zombie survivalistbeccavox on October 18th, 2007 10:31 pm (UTC)
Whoa! I didn't see that coming...

Apparently Nicolas got smacked upside the head with the obvious stick and Danny will have to pay the consequences?

Oh, more, please, please, please...
mikes_grrl on October 18th, 2007 11:03 pm (UTC)
I swear I keep trying to end this series, but it is like the Fic That Will Not Die...LOL!

I'm sure more will appear at some point. It is unkillable.
zombie survivalistbeccavox on October 18th, 2007 11:28 pm (UTC)
maybe you should rename the series "Subtle Terminator"...

I don't want it to die. I would dig up the grave, get the brain, and wait for an electrical storm if I had to!!!!
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mikes_grrl on October 18th, 2007 11:37 pm (UTC)
Not at all. I *AM* writing it. As we...er...type. (Be careful what you ask for; you know me and my angsty "make them all bleed tears" style...)

Don't make me beat you with the 'patience' stick.
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mikes_grrl on October 19th, 2007 12:19 am (UTC)
I love The Secretary too.
wolfy_writing on October 19th, 2007 01:15 am (UTC)
Too cute.
mapanda: Eddie Izzard on: The Art of Wearing Heelmapanda on November 4th, 2007 01:17 am (UTC)
Whoa! I did not see that coming! The way my mind works though, I should have. I love the ending.