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08 October 2007 @ 09:58 pm
Fic: Falling  
Title: Falling
Fandom: Hot Fuzz
Pairing: NA/DB
Word Count: 186
Rating: R or NC-17
Summary: Nicholas. Danny. Locker Room. PWP. Yay!
Note: Inspired in part by nomuh's not-very-worksafe sketch of Nick and Danny in the locker room. I had intended this to be a "prequel" to the drawing, but half-way through writing it, it took a turn in another direction. This is my first fic in absolutely yonks, so please be gentle. It's not been beta'd, so anything bad is all my fault.


There's no room in Nicholas' head for rules and regulations. For once, he doesn't give a damn about proper police procedure. All he cares about at this moment is Danny. Danny's fingers bruising the soft flesh of his hips, Danny's cock filling him up front behind, stroking him there, yes, there! It's hot and rough and he's panting, begging, mumbling fuck and yes and DannyDannyDanny.

The metal locker is cold against his heated skin, his sweaty palms sliding as he tries to gain leverage, tries to keep up with the push-pull rhythm of his lover. He's on the very edge, so close to coming that he wants to scream with it, thinks he must have screamed without realizing it because there's sound filling his ears, but he can't catch it, can't hold it because Danny's leaning over him, pushing that much deeper. He feels Danny's mouth at the base of neck, his teeth clamping down on Nicholas' flesh and that beautiful pain throws him over the edge into everything.

He's falling, falling, but it's okay because Danny's there, too, and Nicholas knows that Danny will always catch him.


Thank you, hawkeyefreak72 for the title suggestion! ::hugs::
 
 
 
sexually frightened know-it-allhawkeyefreak72 on October 9th, 2007 03:52 am (UTC)
|D totally amazing! As for a title..."Falling"?
the girl in the pj's!: hot fuzz | this shit | just got realanesthezea on October 9th, 2007 03:56 am (UTC)
Oh, "Falling" sounds good! Now why couldn't I think of that? hehe. Thanks!
sexually frightened know-it-all: Andes wtfhawkeyefreak72 on October 9th, 2007 04:07 am (UTC)
Yay! You're very welcome! *hugs*
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sexually frightened know-it-allhawkeyefreak72 on October 9th, 2007 04:07 am (UTC)
:D woot! Gotta love the MASH
lacking in glitter: suckagetawg on October 9th, 2007 06:36 am (UTC)
Mmm, very nice. Kinda, hot and sweaty content, but told through a very delicate narrative style.
the girl in the pj's!: fregg | chained | togetheranesthezea on October 9th, 2007 07:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I struggled with this for days! It's so hard for me to write anything - it's been years since I even tried. But I'm glad that I took a chance and posted this. Thank you for the feedback!
mikes_grrl on October 9th, 2007 10:07 am (UTC)
Oooo, nice. Sweet, hot, and tantalizing!

DannyDannyDanny indeed. mmmm

the girl in the pj's!: fregg | chained | togetheranesthezea on October 9th, 2007 07:44 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it!
nomuh on October 9th, 2007 08:37 pm (UTC)
God, I love bottom!Nicholas. Thank you so much!
the girl in the pj's!: fregg | chained | togetheranesthezea on October 9th, 2007 10:43 pm (UTC)
You're very welcome!
hmcgirl on October 9th, 2007 10:43 pm (UTC)
Nnnnf!! <===sound of LOVE

Danny must ALWAYS be on top. ALWAYS.

So great. ::clings::
the girl in the pj's!: fregg | chained | togetheranesthezea on October 9th, 2007 10:48 pm (UTC)
I agree with you there!!

Don't get me wrong, I love all the top!Nick/bottom!Danny stuff on this group, even the stories where they both switch, but my ultimate downfall is bottom!Nick/top!Danny.

Nick's always in control and Danny's so often underestimated that I just know they've gotta be opposite of that in the bedroom (or locker room, or wherever, hehe).
hmcgirl on October 9th, 2007 10:50 pm (UTC)
I *love* the idea of Nick just letting go and becoming all wanton and loud and responsive. That = sex.